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    St. Valentine

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    Divine Feline Fury

    Post by St. Valentine on Thu Sep 11, 2014 11:28 pm

    Skill Name: Divine Feline Fury
    Skill Type: Animal Ability: Natural Claws, Magic: Holy Wind
    Skill Information: Saint Valentine's offensive skillset, Divine Feline Fury is the skill that allows usage of her natural retractable claws, along with magic, particularly magic symbolic of godly sources,  Holy Wind. This is a very versatile set of skills, because the claws can be used to channel magic, or be used as regular claws, and the wind can be used as most anything, provided it be used as a god would use it. However, though extensive practice with it, Acatha has become able to do damage to her opponents in the form of light and wind.

    Skill Strengths:
    -Natural Claws: This ability by nature allows Acatha to use a set of natural cat claws that retract at will. These are not used by a technique, but can only be used after at least one technique has been used.
    -Piercing Light: The techniques of this skill do damage one rank higher to darkness users and does damage two ranks higher to demons.
    -Divine Wind: The wind spells themselves deal Light damage to Dark or Demon targets

    Skill Weaknesses:
    - Close to mid range: the skills of this technique suffer from a close to mid range area, making Acatha have to get close to use any of her techniques
    -Light users get a natural resistance to this skill, making it do a rank lower of damage to them
    -Due to using holy wind as the secondary element, the uses of the wind are rather limited, making her wind spells restricted to Area of Effect spells, or supportive spells.


    F Rank Techs:
    F Rank Technique Name: Holy Movement
    F Rank Technique Type: Supportive
    F Rank Technique Cooldown: 4 posts, 2 post duration
    F Rank Technique Description: A supportive technique, Holy Movement surrounds Valentine with a thin aura of holy wind, allowing her to move at speeds a level higher than hers for two posts.

    F Rank Technique Name: Holy Arrow
    F Rank Technique Type: Offensive, Magic
    F Rank Technique Cooldown: 3 posts
    F Rank Technique Description: A seemingly basic wind spell, this spell takes on the guise of a arrow made entirely of light, which she fires from her palm. This is in truth however, made of holy wind, which naturally glows the same color as light. The target, in this case, is blown back two meters if this hits them while moving, and a meter back if hit while standing or blocking.

    F Rank Technique Name: Claw Vacuum
    F Rank Technique Type: Melee, Magic
    F Rank Technique Cooldown: 2 posts
    F Rank Technique Description: a technique using her natural claws, Valentine surrounds them with holy wind before slashing at an opponent, sending ten small slashes of wind at an opponent, each having a cutting edge, but only come on at a length of a half meter long. As with the rest of her techniques, these slashes are actually godly winds that glow to look like light.

    F Rank Technique Name: Holy Wind: Explosion
    F Rank Technique Type: Holy Wind, Area of Effect
    F Rank Technique Cooldown: 5 posts
    F Rank Technique Description: A basic wind spell, used with pure or "Holy" wind, this spell is created by the user gathering magic energy into their first two fingertips and drawing a cross in the air using their own aura, which then turns a vibrant green and fades away, the wind for five meters around the user stilling as pure winds begin to blow before exploding outwards like a tornado of purity, dealing a rank higher of damage to any beings of dark origin, and banishing NPC spirits of equal tier, while blowing anyone else three meters back.


    Last edited by St. Valentine on Sat Sep 13, 2014 7:49 am; edited 8 times in total
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    Re: Divine Feline Fury

    Post by Amaterasu on Fri Sep 12, 2014 10:07 am

    Everything looks fine. Approved.

    Skill Name: Divine Feline Fury
    Skill Type: Magic: Light, Animal Ability: Natural Claws
    Skill Information: Saint Valentine's offensive skillset, Divine Feline Fury is the skill that allows usage of her natural retractable claws, along with magic, particularly light magic. This is a very versatile set of skills, because the claws can be used to channel light magic, or be used as regular claws!

    Skill Strengths:
    -Natural Claws: This ability by nature allows Acatha to use a set of natural cat claws that retract at will. These are not used by a technique, but can only be used after at least one technique has been used.
    -Piercing Light: The techniques of this skill do damage one rank higher to darkness users and does damage two ranks higher to demons.
    -Healing Factor: The user can channel the healing power of light magic for restorative spells.

    Skill Weaknesses:
    - Close to mid range: the skills of this technique suffer from a close to mid range area, making Acatha have to get close to use any of her techniques
    -Light users get a natural resistance to this skill, making it do a rank lower of damage to them
    -Due to not focusing solely on healing, spells of this skill that focus on healing can only heal minor surface wounds, such as scrapes and cuts.


    F Rank Techs:
    F Rank Technique Name: Holy Movement
    F Rank Technique Type: Supportive
    F Rank Technique Cooldown: 4 posts, 2 post duration
    F Rank Technique Description: A supportive technique, Holy Movement surrounds Valentine with a thin aura of light, allowing her to move at speeds a level higher than hers for two posts.

    F Rank Technique Name: Holy Arrow
    F Rank Technique Type: Offensive, Magic: Light
    F Rank Technique Cooldown: 3 posts
    F Rank Technique Description: a basic light spell, this technique allows Valentine to create a arrow of pure light which is fred at the opponent from the palm of her hand.

    F Rank Technique Name: Claw Vacuum
    F Rank Technique Type: Melee, Light Magic
    F Rank Technique Cooldown: 2 posts
    F Rank Technique Description: a technique using her natural claws, Valentine surrounds them with light before slashing at an opponent, sendin five small slashes of light at an opponent, each having a cutting edge, but only come on at a length of a half meter long.

    F Rank Technique Name: Heavens Grace
    F Rank Technique Type: Healing, Light Magic
    F Rank Technique Cooldown: 3 posts
    F Rank Technique Description: A very basic healing spell, this spell surrounds the target in a healing light, healing all minor surface wounds and healing the targets fatigue, rejuvenating them.
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    Kaseki
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    Re: Divine Feline Fury

    Post by Kaseki on Fri Sep 12, 2014 8:38 pm

    reopened to edits,

    NOTE: YOU GET 3 SKILLS, NOT 4.

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    St. Valentine

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    Re: Divine Feline Fury

    Post by St. Valentine on Fri Sep 12, 2014 9:21 pm

    Ready for grading again Smile
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    Kaseki
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    Re: Divine Feline Fury

    Post by Kaseki on Fri Sep 12, 2014 10:45 pm

    Okay, first is first...

    Your element is Wind, you only have one element.. HOWEVER... you deal Light Based damage?

    Make sense? It's just so you get your abilities AND fit the req.

    Edit and bump when changes are made.

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    St. Valentine

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    Re: Divine Feline Fury

    Post by St. Valentine on Fri Sep 12, 2014 11:27 pm

    Okay..is this good?
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    Kaseki
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    Re: Divine Feline Fury

    Post by Kaseki on Fri Sep 12, 2014 11:31 pm

    Dual Element Ability,

    Edit that. Then I will move on to spells

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    St. Valentine

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    Re: Divine Feline Fury

    Post by St. Valentine on Fri Sep 12, 2014 11:36 pm

    Kay, that's done
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    Re: Divine Feline Fury

    Post by Kaseki on Fri Sep 12, 2014 11:39 pm

    Here...

    "Divine Wind: The wind spells themselves deal Light damage to Dark or Demon targets"

    Something like that... If you do the worsd you used... you have made this whole thing your primary AND secondary.

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    Re: Divine Feline Fury

    Post by St. Valentine on Sat Sep 13, 2014 7:49 am

    Done and got rid of all the references to having light based magic o3o
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    Re: Divine Feline Fury

    Post by Kaseki on Sat Sep 13, 2014 11:44 am

    St. Valentine wrote:Skill Name: Divine Feline Fury
    Skill Type: Animal Ability: Natural Claws, Magic: Holy Wind Remove this, and just have "Wind Conjuration" or something of the sort, here. You don't need to state your animal ability here, you will do this later.
    Skill Information: Saint Valentine's offensive skillset, Divine Feline Fury is the skill that allows usage of her natural retractable claws, along with magic, particularly magic symbolic of godly sources,  Holy Wind. This is a very versatile set of skills, because the claws can be used to channel magic, or be used as regular claws, and the wind can be used as most anything, provided it be used as a god would use it. However, though extensive practice with it, Acatha has become able to do damage to her opponents in the form of light and wind. Holy wind? That needs to be changed.

    Skill Strengths:
    -Natural Claws: This ability by nature allows Acatha to use a set of natural cat claws that retract at will. These are not used by a technique, but can only be used after at least one technique has been used. ... And they deal additional Rank D damage in addition to the standard melee damage. Please state something to that value here.
    -Piercing Light: The techniques of this skill do damage one rank higher to darkness users and does damage two ranks higher to demons.
    -Divine Wind: The wind spells themselves deal Light damage to Dark or Demon targets These last two strengths can be combined.

    Skill Weaknesses:
    - Close to mid range: the skills of this technique suffer from a close to mid range area, making Acatha have to get close to use any of her techniques
    -Light users get a natural resistance to this skill, making it do a rank lower of damage to them
    -Due to using holy wind as the secondary element, the uses of the wind are rather limited, making her wind spells restricted to Area of Effect spells, or supportive spells. Your secondary.. is your secondary. Either remove this from your primary... o combine both apps or something.


    F Rank Techs:
    F Rank Technique Name: Holy Movement
    F Rank Technique Type: Supportive
    F Rank Technique Cooldown: 4 posts, 2 post duration
    F Rank Technique Description: A supportive technique, Holy Movement surrounds Valentine with a thin aura of holy wind, allowing her to move at speeds a level higher than hers for two posts.

    F Rank Technique Name: Holy Arrow
    F Rank Technique Type: Offensive, Magic
    F Rank Technique Cooldown: 3 posts
    F Rank Technique Description: A seemingly basic wind spell, this spell takes on the guise of a arrow made entirely of light, which she fires from her palm. This is in truth however, made of holy wind, which naturally glows the same color as light. The target, in this case, is blown back two meters if this hits them while moving, and a meter back if hit while standing or blocking.

    F Rank Technique Name: Claw Vacuum
    F Rank Technique Type: Melee, Magic
    F Rank Technique Cooldown: 2 posts
    F Rank Technique Description: a technique using her natural claws, Valentine surrounds them with holy wind before slashing at an opponent, sending ten small slashes of wind at an opponent, each having a cutting edge, but only come on at a length of a half meter long. As with the rest of her techniques, these slashes are actually godly winds that glow to look like light.

    F Rank Technique Name: Holy Wind: Explosion
    F Rank Technique Type: Holy Wind, Area of Effect
    F Rank Technique Cooldown: 5 posts
    F Rank Technique Description: A basic wind spell, used with pure or "Holy" wind, this spell is created by the user gathering magic energy into their first two fingertips and drawing a cross in the air using their own aura, which then turns a vibrant green and fades away, the wind for five meters around the user stilling as pure winds begin to blow before exploding outwards like a tornado of purity, dealing a rank higher of damage to any beings of dark origin, and banishing NPC spirits of equal tier, while blowing anyone else three meters back.


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